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Gateway

They say that your eyes are the gateway into your soul. This gateway is either open or closed. It’s never ajar or half way. It is either opened or closed.

When its open your eyes show your emotions very clearly but when its closed your eyes are still and calm and you can tell nothing.

Ever since I knew Aldric his eyes were always mysterious and spellbinding. The gateway was open but very hard to understand. His eyes were mixed with so many emotions I couldn’t even start to name them all.

I didn’t care though I just wanted to be with him to see his eyes and be near this perfect man. He was so kind and so easy to talk to. I just wanted to share my life with him.

I was so happy the day I looked into his eyes and saw his gateway was clearing is soul was calming. His dark green eyes were becomes softer. They looked more human and I loved it. I loved to see his emotions and watch his eyes change as his mind settled.

On our wedding night his eyes were so full of joy and happiness I couldn’t stop looking at them.

When he died my gateway closed and I cried for days on end. But when I died my eyes showed nothing but joy as the gateway stood wide open.
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Author's Comments

I hate this story. It sucks because i totaly didnt get how to write a "gateway" story its a weird theme! Anyways i hope you enjoy!

Aldric (c) 56hehehehe56

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:iconcolona1:
it was good i liked it!
:iconadictedtobadguys56:
really?

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"Less banging more moaning"-Mr. Hardgrove
:icon33snickerdoodle33:
8D
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I was hooked by the first sentence because I love that analogy(?) !

Sweet fic. =)
:iconadictedtobadguys56:
Y? It was crap

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"Less banging more moaning"-Mr. Hardgrove
:iconadictedtobadguys56:
was 2

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"Less banging more moaning"-Mr. Hardgrove
:iconcolona1:
it wasn't as good as some of the other stories you wrote but it was still good!!!

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